Category: Writing


College Essay About O.A.R.

My College Essay signed by O.A.R.

When sitting down to write my college admissions essay I realized that it had to be about a topic that I had a strong personal connection to. The choice for me, quite clearly, was O.A.R., my favorite band whom I’ve seen several times in concert and have met on more than one occasion. This 639-word essay–along with other things–got me accepted into Elon University, my top-choice school, where I’ll be studying Communications in the fall. When I met the band in November at the Hard Rock Cafe I had four of the five members sign the essay. The essay is a small reflection of my own personality.

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“I wish the world was run by love and absolutely nothing more.”

It’s a bold statement but one I try and live my life by. I’ve written the quote on the edges of hundreds of sheets of paper and have used it as my Facebook status on more than one occasion.

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As one of the eighteen accepted members in the Robert W. Greene High School Journalism Institute my first assignment, before even beginning the ten-day program, was to write a profile about one of the other members. I profiled Shirley Capron and we edited the article during the program. My first draft ended up looking very different from the final copy, which follows below. The article can also be read on the showcase website for the program.

Magazines, Movies and Mom Key in Future Journalist’s Life

By Jeff Stern
Greene Team Correspondent

Shirley Christina Capron, 17, of Roosevelt, Long Island, has always had a passion for writing. Capron is one of 18 Long Island high school students inducted into the inaugural year of the Robert W. Greene High School Journalism Institute at Stony Brook University.

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‘Teach Your Children Well’ was the third article I wrote for the Boating Times Long Island magazine. The article appeared in the April issue and was about generational boating and instilling a love for boating within the family. I did all the research and interviews for the article. I also chose the picture that was used to accompany the article by asking my friend David if I could use the picture of him, his dad, and his grandpa. The published version of the article can be read by clicking on the image to the right.

However, don’t start the process of fostering a love of boating by handing your six-year olds the keys to the Boston Whaler. Safety is indispensable and, as Kathy Coward stresses, “just because boating is a recreational activity, there are still consequences that come along with operating a boat. They must be responsible and know when fooling around is not acceptable so no one gets hurt.”

The second article that I wrote for Boating Times Long Island was a feature article for their recurring section: Don’t Do What I Did!, a section about boater’s mistakes and what they learned from them. I retold a story of my dad’s, a trip he took that put a lot of damage on our boat. The article, which first appeared in the February issue of BTLI. can be seen in its published form by clicking on the images to the right.

“The feeling that you get when you’re jumping waves with a jet ski? That’s not what you want to experience when operating a 42′ foot convertible! But with their adrenaline racing, instead of backing down, they overpowered the wave and landed hard, accompanied by the sounds that turned out to be the sudden shattering of the Corian countertops.”


I have begun writing for Boating Times Long Island, a local boating magazine that is distributed monthly. My first article is about Sea Sickness appeared in the September issue. I did the research and interviews before submitting it to my editor. The article can be seen in its published form by clicking on the image to the right.

“Though motion sickness affects around 90% of those who ride on top the water, most long-time boaters become immune to the nauseating feelings we call sea sickness. But why do some boaters still feel it all their lives, while first-timers may never suffer?”